Can People Live in Harmony with Nature
Man and nature are interactive (相互作用的) forces.
Looking back along the river of history, we may find that harmony used to exist between people and nature. At that time nature was pure field to be ploughed, sown and harvested. Man respected nature and was one part of nature.
It seems that people today are masters of natureg Nature is torn into pieces. While we are disrupting(破坏) the order of the natural world, we are the ultimate victims, for nature is seeking its revenge(报复). Disappearing forests, drying rivers, polluted soil and worsening climate have punished greedy human beings. We have taken too much from nature, and given back too little.
Looking forward to the future, when we gain reasoning, when we remember the deep interdependent relationship between people and nature, when citizens of the world work persistently to protect nature, then nature will be our friend instead of our slave or servant. Sure, people can live in harmony with nature, with commitment, hard work and new technology.
核心剖析 按照提纲设计，本论述文的表达结构是线性的。引占以公认的哲学原理Man and natureare interactive forces开头，中间穿插了大量有说服力的细节，文章最后连用了三个“when从句”强调人与自然和谐相处的必要条件。整个展开提纲过程是以论据证明观点正确的逻辑推理过程。全文写作基于提纲，但不拘泥于提纲，严谨与灵活的把握使文章 ‘脉相承、内容丰满。